Our draft had some good points and some bad points, our draft had a good build up to it and we also had a good office scene we will use more the shots in the office scene in our final film. In the walking down to the fight scene we had a number of good shots when running for example we had a number of good shots including a point of view, we made the running scenes fasted paced which adds a needed tempo. We have also considered removing the walking scenes and replace then with a car pulling up instead.
The bad points of our draft are that we had a poor fight scene this is because we did have enough cuts we just kept the one camera shot throughout the fight, this didn't give the audience a sense of pace and it just doesn't seem realistic.
Again like in our preliminary we have learn't about how to make shots more realistic, more dynamic and we have more experience with the mac computers and the camera, these experiences will help us a lot with the final film.
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